Thursday, August 27, 2020
Pandemic Games:
Friday, August 14, 2020
Changing My Tropes
I’ve been writing
a series for some years now about a private detective named Frank Swiver, who
walks the mean streets of San Francisco circa 1948-’50 (so far). I became
comfortable using private eye and noir tropes, such as
- characters driven by loneliness, anger, sex, greed, ambition
- cigarettes (everybody smokes)
- gabardine suits, trench coats, fedoras (all the men wear them)
- the femme fatale
- characters haunted by the past
- an unhealthy relationship with alcohol
Last year, I began to think, how did Frank become a private dick? Kind of like a comic book superhero origin story. I took an opening shot at it last year in “The Road from Manzanar,” (Ellery Queen Mystery Magazine, March-April 2019), set way back in 1942. In “Manzanar,” Frank, a pacifist ever since his experiences in the Spanish Civil War, is trying to convince the draft board he’s a conscientious objector. Well, stories sometimes take the writer places he hadn’t planned to go, and this one turned out to be a fun, complete adventure before I ever got where I was headed about the origin of Frank’s Old Vine Detective Agency.
But I was headed
for a time before “Manzanar,” when Frank took the first steps on his ultimate
career path. It happened in Spain in August 1937, when he did a little
investigating while he and the Abe Lincoln Battalion were bivouacked around
Bujaraloz, preparing for an offensive against Zaragoza, capital of Aragón. This
month I wrote a first draft of that story, “Friends of Durruti.” It was great
fun writing, even though I found myself adrift in new sub-genres—a bit of
Hemingway-war-drama/romance, and a bit of Alan-Furst/Somerset-Maugham-espionage/intrigue.
Whatever it was, it did not use all the same tropes as stories from P.I.
Central.
Buenaventura Durruti |
By tropes, I mean
plot, character, or setting expedients that help make the story run, and that
the reader recognizes as a device or trope. What I like about tropes is the
familiarity. In a P.I. story, I can describe a mysterious woman as tall or
short; but either way, if she’s the femme fatale, the reader knows she has gams
and they’re long enough to reach the ground; whether she’s a blonde or a
brunette, she has desires for sex, money, or escape from the constraints of her
life—uncontrollable, all-consuming desires that will lead to her destruction, (and
if he’s not careful, to the P.I.’s demise, too).
Here are a couple tropes that you won’t find in “Friends of Durruti:”
- there is no client, bringing a case to the P.I. to be investigated.
- there are no cops, so hapless that the P.I. is the only guy around who can solve the case. (In “Durruti,” Frank is in a war zone, and the only “police” at hand are the Soviet NKVD.)
Some things remained the same, or similar. Frank’s style, language, and fashions tend to be anchored in the 1930s and 1940s. In Spain, he’s traded in the shabby gabardine suit, trench coat, and fedora of his future P.I. days for a mismatched and shabby uniform (and fedora). He can’t get fresh Camels, so he rolls his short unfiltered smokes with Spanish Picadura tobacco.
Other tropes
remained. I continued to write about Frank’s struggles with demon alcohol. (Is
that a P.I. trope or what?) Frank’s friend Max brought him to fight in Spain to
get him away from the wino tendencies that were causing him to slip into
darkness. But his deep and intense relationship with alcohol continues in
“Durruti” as the femme fatale introduces him to absinthe—legal in Spain.
And the femme fatale, one of my favorite tropes—we have one in Durruti. Felina, a dame driven by loneliness, sex, and desire for a better life. Frank must determine—is Felina a good Catholic girl? Or a duplicitous cortesana?
A not uncommon
trope of mystery/P.I./noir fiction is characters haunted by the past. A slight
twist in this story: Frank is living the past that will haunt him in his P.I.
days.
And some things
barely changed at all. Frank’s a tough, cynical guy with street smarts. Not
strong in deductive reasoning, Frank solves mysteries with dogged persistence.
Perhaps the main
trope in “Friends of Durruti,” is not from the P.I. sub-genre specifically, but
from noir--disillusion, pessimism, and the unhappy ending. In Frank’s noir-ish
P.I. world, his quest to solve a mystery often leads him into a shadowy world
of betrayal in which clients and criminals can blur. In Republican Spain in
August 1937, Frank and Max fought for the Second Spanish Republic, whose
military consisted of all manner of left-wing militias--Socialists, Communists,
Anarchists, Social Democrats, and Trotskyites, along with the International
Brigades, all led by Soviet officers and Spaniards trained by the Soviets. Their
enemies were the Nationalist army of Spain and the Spanish African troops, the
fascists, Falangists, Carlists, Requetes, and Catholics, and the Italian troops
sent by Mussolini and Hitler’s Condor Legion. Frank Swiver’s allies and his
enemies blur among the complex and shifting alliances, and he and Felina do not
live happily ever after.